Storyteller notes
Storyteller notes
storyteller
Poem by Liz Lochhead
Analysis by Charlie
The poem
1.she sat down 16.Dishwater or tasty was her soup.
2.at the scoured table 15.To tell the stories was her work.
3.in the swept kitchen 17.It was like spinning,
4.beside the dresser with its cracked delft. 18.gathering thin air to the singlest strongest thread.
5.And every last crumb of daylight was salted away.
19.Night in she’d have us waiting,
6No one could say the stories were useless 20.held breath, for the ending we knew by heart.
7.for as the tongue clacked 21.And at first light
8.five or forty fingers stitched (anaphora) 22.as the women stirred themselves to build the fire
9.corn was grated from the husk 23.as the peasant’s feet felt for clogs
10.patchwork was pieced 24.as thin grey washed over flat fields
11.or the darning was done. 25.the stories dissolved in the whorl of the ear
26.but they
12.Never the one to slander her shiftless. 27.hung themselves upside down in the sleeping heads of the
children
13. Daily sloven or spotless no matter whether
28.till they flew again in the storytellers night.
Summary
The author comes from a place where storytelling is very important (she is a Scottish poet and lived in a time and place where modern
entertainment wasn't available.
1970’s feminist movement was one of the events that inspired her to write this poem.
Scottish literary renaissance was also happening at this time. It was a 20th century movement reviving Scottish culture,
language, and literature.
This poem was written during a time that the author (Liz Lochhead) was deeply engaged in exploring themes of
community, storytelling, and feminism.
Setting
There are many metaphors and similes in the poem. Some include:
Bats: The stories are described as hanging upside down in the children’s minds during the day, much like bats do
when they sleep. At night, the stories “fly again” around the children’s mind and imagination.
Light and dark: light represents knowledge and understanding, but the dark is where the stories have their full
effect, casting mystery and shadows on reality. But on the contrary, the poem uses imagery to create a cozy,
warm atmosphere where the storytellers words are the only source of light in the dark winter.
Themes
The Power of Stories: The poem highlights how stories are essential to daily life
and have a lasting impact on those who hear them.
The Role of Women: The poem places a lowly female domestic worker at the
center, highlighting her importance through her storytelling.
The speaker begins by describing the setting. The storyteller, referred to as ‘she’, sits down at a
table in the clean and scoured kitchen next to a dresser that’s covered in cracked deft, a kind of
old Japanese pottery. To make the scene more vivid, the speaker also depicts the sun setting. It’s
the last few seconds of the day before it’s nighttime. The fact that the word ‘she’ is not capital,
means that this routine happens nightly.
Stanza 2
• Irregular structure
• No consistent length or pattern or rhyme scheme of the stanzas
• Narrative style, tells a story
• Uses lots of imagery and metaphors.
language
• Lyrical and Figurative Language: The author employs lyrical and figurative language to
emphasize the importance of storytelling.
• Imagery: the poem is filled with imagery, such as the stories being compared to bats, and the
storyteller waving stories out of thread.
• Alliteration: the repeated use of the ‘s’ sounds, such as ‘she sat’, ‘scoured,’ and ‘swept’, adds a
musical like tone to the poem and enhances the rhythm and flow.
• Scottish language and archaic words: the use of Scottish dialect and archaic language (delft,
dresser), add a sense of authenticity and timelessness.
• Personification: the author gives human qualities to non-human elements, such as when she
describes the stories as having the ability to “captivate” and “enthrall” the listeners, making
the stories seem almost alive.
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