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A LEVEL ECONOMICS
EXAMPLE ESSAYS
Microeconomics:
Theory of the Firm
with Examiner Commentary
Written by experienced teachers and senior
examiners
Commentary by principal examiners
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Learn how to structure an essay, integrate
Tien develop chains of analysis, and build
Rigel reece}Suggest Essay Structure for A Level Economics
Following the tutor2u suggested essay structure and technique can help you to write economics
essays that are capable of achieving a top band mark. The key to any successful essay is PLANNING!
Identify the 3 or 4 key points that you will be writing about
in your essay
INTRODUCTION Write one sentence to summarise your conclusion - use
the words from the question to indicate to the examiner
that you are FOCUSED on the precise question
Use the PECAN PIE and go APE approach (see below!)
FOR EACH POINT... The final sentence for each point should directly answer
the question
It is VITAL that you reach a judgment to score top marks
CONCLUSION Don’t introduce anything new - base your judgment on the
arguments you have already made
PECAN PiE — How to Structure a Point
An essay needs at least 3 slices of PECAN PIE!
P— clearly state your point in one sentence
E—then explain your point very briefly
CAN — provide contextualised analysis by writing a step-by-step chain of argument and
integrating examples
PIE — now consider your original point but in evaluation - don’t just focus on disadvantages
__or generic evaluation, but instead really think about why your point.may_not be valid — use
the go APE strategy.
Go APE - How to Evaluate Your Point
Assumptions — consider why the assumptions that underpin the theory you have used to
make your analytical point may not be valid
Perspectives — consider your point from different perspectives
For micro, you could use the mnemonic PLASTIC to help you (producers, location, age,
skill, time, income level, consumers)
For macro, you could use the mnemonic TINKER to help you (trade offs, immediacy,
Neoclassical, Keynesian, equity, region)
Evidence ~ consider you point in light of evidence, either in favour or againstLevel Economies Example Essays - Theory of the Firm cas
In January 2016, the makers of Ray-Ban sunglasses, Luxottica, agreed a merger
with a rival eye-wear firm, Essilor, worth €46bn. Evaluate the likely advantages and
disadvantages for businesses growing in this way.
Firms may grow in a number of ways - internally (organically) or externally The student shows that
by merging or taking over another firm. The Luxattica/ Essilor merger is an they have understood the
example of external growth, The key advantage of growth by acquisition is that ___main topicin the question,
the firms are likely to achieve cost savings, more quickly than using internal and used the context.
growth. However, external growth is more likely to attract the attention of the The key arguments are
competition authorities, and in the long run, may also fail to deliver many of the outlined.
expected advantages, perhaps resulting in a demerger.
One key advantage of a merger is that it can allow the firms in question to achieve
the economic benefits of operating on a large scale more quickly, and with more The first point builds on the
certainty than via internal growth. A merger takes place when two firms agree to Key advantage outlined in
combine their operations in the hope of achieving synergies. One such advantage the introduction ~ this is
is internal economies of scale. These occur when long run average total costs good structure.
fall as the scale of output rises. Depending on whether the merger is horizontal
or vertical, cost savings could come from a number of sources. Luxottica and
Essilor are suppliers of broadly similar products so this would be an example of
a horizontal merger, allowing greater specialisation and purchasing economies here with specific reference
(e.g. UVB reflective film for sunglass lenses). There might arguably be advantages __to the companies, AND an
from vertical integration by being able to access each other’s supply chains (e.g, attempt to use examples
suppliers of glasses cases). Another possibility includes technical economies from the eyewear industry.
if the merger allows use of specialised pieces of plant and machinery, volume
economies or economies of massed resources.
used well
The impact of economies of scale for
the firms is shown on the diagram. .
The green shaded box shows vo
the total supernormal profit that =
individual firms can achieve with cost
Thisis an example
Merant ——_of a diagram
that allows AOS
marks (analysis)
structure ACL. Economies of scale a - rather than
achieved as the result of the merger / Just AOI marks
allow the cost structure AC2 to be (knowledge)
reached and profit is considerably because the
larger (as shown by the peach- diagram is
coloured box). This isa significant adapted and
advantage to the merged business = ~carefully
arising from gains in productive is integrated into
efficiency, The same results might ‘the written
have been achievable with internal growth, but more slowly. analysis.
However, the analysis diagram assumes an unchanged demand schedule in
the face of the merger, and this may not be so. It is possible that customers for
products such as high end sunglasses value the exclusivity of the brand and would
be less likely to purchase from a business that accounts for a large proportion
of the market, and so AR would shift inwards. It is possible too that removal
of a rival firm means that there is less incentive to be productively efficient so
xinefficiency may result. While the average total cost curve has fallen, the newly
merged business may be incurring costs way above it. That said mergers in many
industries are expected to achieve more rapid cost savings and profit increases
This is an excellent
example of evaluating by
questioning assumptions.
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than other forms of growth, This is a key advantage of merger.
The use of the word
‘significant’ here is an easy
way for students to express
A significant cisadvantage of a business growing by merger is that it may attract
the attention of the competition authorities, in a way that internal growth might
not. By merging with a rival firm, the market for eyewear has become more
concentrated, and contestability has lessened. Given the size of the deal (€46bn), a degree of judgernent,
itis likely that the resulting business now has significant monopoly power. This which is essential in
means that the profit maximising firm could restrict output and raise price to achieving top band
achieve higher supernormal profits. It might aiso be able to price discriminate responses.
to raise revenue and profits even further. This is likely to attract the attention of,
the UK Competition and Markets Authority (CMA) who have a remit to investigate This is an excellent example
actions which restrict or distort competition. While the business itself may have of a developed chain of
a lot to gain from increased monopoly power, it is likely to want to avoid an analysis being used in
investigation. Investigations takes time and causes delay, incurs costs and risks evaluatic
adverse media comment, all of which can negatively impact on profit. If the
merger is disallowed, the firms in question may now become the target of a fresh Aneat end to the
hostile takeover, However, the likelihood of an investigation depends on the size paragraph, using “depends
of the market, and the contestability. No information is provided on this, but the on” phrases that are
risk is higher than with internal growth, so the desirability of growth via merger carefully chosen and not
depends on the degree of risk-aversion of the firm and its owners “run of the mail”
A further disadvantage of growth by merger is that many of the hoped for
benefits fall to materialise. Itis said that the majority of mergers fall into this
category. In behavioural economics terms, it seems that perhaps there is
bounded rationality in considering the vast amounts of information available,
and some sort of optimism bias at work. There are a number of reasons why
this may be so. One is the cost of the merger itself. If itis debt financed for
example, then the need to repay and finance the loan may present a significant.
burden. It may also be that if other parties were interested in the deal the price
eventually negotiated was too high - the so-called winner's curse. €46bn is a
large deal so this is an important consideration. It is possible too that rather than,
bringing the combined business closer to minimum efficient scale, it actually
takes it to the point where diseconomies of scale start to operate. For many
businesses, post-merger, integrating systems such as IT proves to be a problem.
Also cultural incompatibility can be a major cause, due to clashing priorities and
perhaps personalities of senior managers. Sometimes human capital is lost, if the
‘most skilled labour prefers to work for smaller businesses where there is more
autonomy. There are exceptions of course but in the case of the Luxottica/ Essilor Data helps to raise the
merger, these seem valid concerns. Research by Harvard Business School suggests Quality of the evaluation.
that between 70% and 90% of mergers fail.
This is excellent synoptic
analysis, demonstrating
holistic economic thinking.
Good use of the context
here.
In conclusion, there are a number of possible advantages to businesses from
growing from mergers, as indeed there must be, given the amount of such
activity. However, there are disadvantages too and the claim that most merger
deals fail to achieve the hoped for benefits is persuasive. There is nothing
obvious about the Luxottica/ Essilor merger which suggests they would be
immune from the risk of failure. Therefore, itis reasonable to think that the
disadvantages of a business growing by merger, most probably outweighs the
advantages.
A clear judgements
reached, allowing this essay
to be awarded a top band
mark
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Shares in Premier Foods, the company behind famous brands such as Mr Kipling cakes
and Bisto gravy, plummeted following a January 2017 profit warning issued by the firm,
in which rising production costs were blamed. Evaluate the view that all businesses
should aim to maximise their profits.
Profit is the difference between total revenue and total cost. In traditional This is a super opening
economic theory, firms are assumed to maximise profits, but itis arguable in paragraph, which carefully
today’s complex and globalised world whether this is the case. This essay will _sets out the structure of the
consider three key arguments. First, that profit is the reward for risk taking and argument and hints at the
is essential to business success. Second, that profit satisficing might be more conclusion.
appropriate as an aim, and finally that perhaps profit maximisation should indeed
be the aim, but only in the long run rather than the short run.
Profit is the reward for risk taking and most commercial private sector businesses The purpose of the diagram
exist to make profit. Traditional theory assumes that firms will aim to maximise is introduced, and then
profit. On the diagram below, representing a firm in imperfect competition, a careful explanation is
profit maximisation is achieved where MR=MC. Output will be Q1 and at this given of its relevance ~it
level of output the maximum is vital that
price that can be charged is P1 as diagrams are
AAR lies significantly above AC at oe Ta well integrated
Q1 indicating large supernormal “ into the written
profits are being earned. 0 \ onalysis inthis
Maximising profits achieves a AY fe way.
high reward for entrepreneurs 7
and shareholders. in the case of - ‘,
listed companies such as Premier ao ?
Foods the likely softening of
their share price from poor profit -
results could lead to shareholder
discontent and perhaps risk a Prac an MC=4AR ore.
hostile takeover.
Furthermore, maximising profits can provide an important source of finance
for further investment by a firm, perhaps crucial in the case of a new small firm
without an established track record to obtain a bank loan. Profit is therefore
essential to the survival of firms.
However, achieving profit maximisation-is not easy. It may be that lack of
accurate and timely information on revenue and costs may hamper decision-
making; indeed, accountants do not monitor marginal costs and revenues. Even ‘This evaluative paragraph
if information is available, firms will experience bounded rationality ~ an inability demonstrates excellent
to handle such large amounts of data and take rational decisions. Firms may synoptic thinking, as well as
adopt instead simpler rules of thumb (known as heuristics) such as cost plus ‘examining the practicality
pricing in response. While itis lack of profit that has caused difficulty for Premier of the theory previously
Foods, its immediate objective is survival, and it may not be possible to focus on mentioned.
short run profit maximisation, however important to business success. More
generally, the aim of true profit maximisation may be difficult if not impossible to
achieve for many firms.
‘Secondly for many companies with significant numbers of stakeholders, and
a divorce of ownership from control, profit satisficing might be a better aim,
and more practical. A stakeholder is anyone with an interest or concern in
‘a. company, This would include shareholders, managers, employees and
ic e
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customers. For large companies such as Premier Foods with perhaps thousands _The essay is following the
+ of shareholders, a Board of Directors is appointed to represent their interests, same structure as outlined
” and a team of managers undertakes the day to day running of the business. in the introduction.
There is likely to be asymmetrical information with managers possessing a
monopoly of the technical knowledge about the business (the so-called principal- The technical economics
agent problem) and additional problems resulting from moral hazard if managers used in this analysis is
enjoy the reward when risk pays off but do not suffer the costs when they do excellent, and draws on
not. In this situation, managers have different incentives and hence objectives topics from across the
to shareholders and other stakeholders. While various methods can be used ‘course content.
to re-align objectives such as profit related pay, there is persuasive evidence of
industries where revenue maximisation appears to be the dominant strategy —
for example streamed TV and films (which occurs when MR = zero). The situation
becomes more complicated when stakeholders such as employees and customers
are taken into account. True profit maximisation would mean paying employees Again, the practicality
the lowest possible wage, and charging customers an ever-varying price. This is of profit maximising is
not achievable nor desirable. Political and social objectives may come into play addressed, which shows
for a company such as Premier Foods with growing social concerns over obesity _ ea engagement with the
and sugar content, The outcome is likely to be that firms profit satisfice ~ that is subject.
aim to achieve a level of profit that is likely to be satisfactory to stakeholders. On
the diagram, this could lie anywhere between profit maximisation and normal
profit (where AR = AC). For many firms, for the reasons given, satisficing is likely
to be a better objective than profit maximising, Good use of context
The preceding argument has focused on the short run. In the long run, there
may be stronger arguments for firms focusing more on profit maximisation than
other objectives. Firms are likely to be able to earn abnormal profits onan on- Good technical knowledge
going basis where barriers to entry are high and contestability is low. If this is not
the case, high profits send a signal to firms currently outside the market to enter,
and compete away profits that are in excess of normal. There are many factors Again, the argument looks
influencing the ease with which firms can enter a market, but if incumbent firms organised because the key
experience significant economies of scale or brand loyalty for instance, new entry point of the paragraph was
will be more difficult. Businesses aiming to maximise long run profits may well referenced in the opening
adopt short run strategies such as revenue, sales or growth maximisation to build paragraph.
market share. On the diagram revenue maximisation occurs where MR= and
sales maximisation where normal profit is earned. All of these strategies sacrifice There are strong chains of
short run profit maximisation in the interests of longer run gains. Examples of analysis demonstrated in
this sort of behaviour can be seen in the coffee market with Costa Coffee rapidly this paragraph, explaining
expanding its number of outlets, undoubtedly at high cost, and Amazon, Spotify the dynamism of market
-—and-Net#Hic butiding-(exponentially} the number-of active-eustomer-accounts. Ifa structures.
market is more contestable however, as it may well be for Premier Foods, then a
strategy of aiming for profits closer to normal may be more sensible to avoid the The examples and use of
entry of new rival firms and make it easier to maximise longer-term profits. the Premier Foods context
«are helpful in enhancing the
In conclusion, while profit matters and no business could afford to ignore it quality of the argument.
completely (even publically-owned businesses or social enterprises), the view
that all businesses should aim to maximise their profits is difficult to sustain.
For the reasons given, it may not be possible for them to do so (in the strictest An excellent conclusion —
economic sense of the term), although many firms do seem to employ strategies nothing new is introduced,
more consistent with long term profit goals. It seems unlikely, though, that these but overarching statements
are maximising goals. Most firms will, and should be profit seeking, but it seems are made that allow a
most probable that the majority of businesses should be aiming to profit satisfice judgement to be reached
and not profit maximise.
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January 2017. This will result in the world’s largest tobacco company. One of the reasons
cited for the deal was to benefit from increased economies of scale. Evaluate the view
that having a business objective of increased economies of scale is always desirable.
Economies of scale arise when long run average costs fall when firms increase
the scale of their production. In reaching a view on whether economies
of scale are always desirable, this essay will consider the issue from the
perspective of a business itself, but in reality there will be impacts on
consumers, competitors, government and society as a whole. This essay will
consider first the impact of such an objective on business costs, efficiency and
profits, second the risk that pursuing this objective will increase the likelihood
instead of experiencing diseconomies of scale and finally the possibility that
pursuing this objective might attract unwanted responses from other market
participants or competition authorities.
The first reason why such a business objective might be desirable is that the
lower cost structure means that total profits rise. On the diagram, at scale
of output Q1, a profit maximising firm (equating MR with MC) would earn
the profit shown by the green box. However, at a larger scale of output, Q2,
costs savings might be
possible perhaps due ie
to technical economies wee
such as indivisibilities or =
volume, or economies of A"
marketing or research and
development. The latter r
is likely to be especially
important for an industry
such as tobacco as next- a
generation products,
such as e-cigarettes,
are developed. At scale
of output Q2, average = = von
costs are lower, and
although the price paid by
consumers has fallen to P2, and hence consumer surplus increased (generally
an advantage, but perhaps not so in this case with cigarettes being a demerit
00d), profits have risen significantly as shown by the grey box. Supernormal
profits allow greater rewards to be paid to shareholders and can provide an
additional source of finance for capital investment in an industry that might
find more conventional bank borrowing problematic and expensive.
However, profits will only increase to the extent indicated if the firm in
question is xefficient. X-inefficiency occurs when there is organisational slack
(perhaps due to lack of real competition) and higher wages than necessary
are paid, or perhaps there is over-staffing, or simply wasteful production. On
the diagram, the firm would operate above its average cost curve, rather than
on it. This is possible in an industry such as tobacco, which is concentrated,
or where firms might choose to pay higher wages to avoid further public
criticism. More generally, although there are significant economies of scale to
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ts US rival Reynolds in
This is a smart opening
paragraph ~ the student
recognises that they
cannot cover everything
in the available time,
and therefore note that
they will focus purely on
the arguments from the
business itself.
This is an excellent example
of a diagram that is being
used to develop and
support the analysis - the
relevance of
Moxrofet the diagram
output 2 is carefully
written about.
Excellent use
oa of context,
demonstrating
the importance
of knowing
about the
wider world
and being
observant
The key point of the
paragraph ~ rising profit
is referred to again,
demonstrating a strong
paragraph structure,
A succinct way of
introducing technical
evaluation.
tutor2u °be gained in many industries such as car manufacturing and pharmaceuticals,
is is not always the case. In some of the service sectors, for example,
the minimum efficient scale (MES) could be low especially if little specialist The final sentence of this
capital is required. In the UK, the service sector accounts for around 75% of paragraph links explicitly
GDP, suggesting that achieving economies of scale may not be essential. So, back to the question,
although lower costs and improved profitability is one reason why an objective which helps to build a solid
of increased economies of scale might be desirable for many firms, itis structure.
doubtful if this is always the case.
‘A second factor with a bearing on whether an objective of increased The point of the paragraph
economies of scale is always desirable is the risk that such a strategy would is made clear immediately.
instead lead to diseconomies of scale. Diseconomies of scale occur when
long run average costs rise as the scale of output increases. While technical Excellent definition.
economies and so on may still be operating, these are now more than
offset by difficulties with administration, communication, coordination and
motivation. This may be especially so where the scale of output has increased
because firms have merged (amicably) or where there has been a takeover as
for British American Tobacco and Reynolds. In this case, different corporate _ Excellent use of behavioural
cultures can increase the probability of diseconomies of scale arising. Firms economics, which
may overestimate the likelihood of experiencing economies of scale and demonstrates sound
underestimate the risk of diseconomies of scale - an example of optimism synoptic knowledge.
bias. In industries where there are constant returns to scale over large output
ranges, the risk will be less, but this is a reason why itis doubtful that having
an objective of economies of scale is always desirable.
A final factor to be considered is the likely response of other market
participants and the competition authorities. Unless total market size is More evidence of excellent
growing (which it isn’t for tobacco), such a strategy would mean the firm in use of the context.
question obtained a larger market share. This is not the only factor to be
considered by the competition authorities, but it increases the chances of
their attention and the costs and time associated with an investigation, even if
there is no further action. Itis also likely that other market participants would
respond, perhaps aggressively, which could damage market share and profit.
IF economies of scale are significant, the market is likely to be concentrated, Good use of technical
and the decisions of the firms concerned will be interconnected. While economic theory, backed
game theory throws light on the possible consequences, uncertainty would up with appropriate
be significant:-While there is evidence of some large businesses pursuing terminology.
jum growth strategy - such as Amazon and Costa Coffee, it is not
sufficiently widespread to provide compelling evidence that having a business
objective of increased economies of scale is always desirable.
To claim that having a business objective of increased economies of scal
always desirable would require both robust theoretical evidence in support,
together with numerous and credible real world examples of success. While
there are some, there are equally compelling arguments against. The number Steer that the judgement
of mergers or takeovers which fail to produce the expected results is a isn'ton one side or the
compelling argument against. For many firms a business objective of increased ‘other
economies of scale may well be desirable, but it not possible to conclude on
the basis of the arguments provided that it is always so.
A judgement is reached on
whether economies of scale
are desirable ~it doesn’t
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The telecoms provider EE was fined £2.7m by the industry regulator Gicora in early
2017 for overcharging thousands of customers who had used their mobile phones when
abroad. EE has significant market power. Evaluate the extent to which the existence of
monopolies is always bad for consumers.
Economic theory suggests that monopolies are bad for consumers, but in
practice this is not necessarily the case. This essay will evaluate the arguments
and welfare loss in monopoly, which
provides evidence that they are. Second, a possible counter argument is
provided by considering economies of scale and dynamic efficiencies. Finally,
the importance of potential competition and contestability is explored. It will
be shown that whilst some monopolies may be bad for consumers, that is not
by first considering the static efficien
always the case.
An argument in support of the claim that monopolies are always bad for
The key arguments
‘as well as the overall
judgement are outlined
in the introduction, which
strengthens the structure
and indicates to the
examiner that this is likely
to be a top band answer
consumers comes from considering static efficiencies and welfare loss. In theory, oq marks are picked up
a pure monopoly exists when one firm supplies the entire output of an industry.
here, with o definition of
Itis at the opposite end of the competitive spectrum from perfect competition ‘monojioly
- a theoretical market which acts as a benchmark against which other market
structures may be This is 0 useful
judged, as per the diagram
diagram to the right. Sap iopetecs
competition) that simply
The competitive market / Wie {in monepoty} and quickly
equilibrium will be at indicates the
Ppc and Qpe, where the static problems
price mechanism has . with monopoly,
brought about market ° as well as
clearing. Each of the being carefully
many individual firms ' Demand inseriect integrated into
will be earning normal \! competion) the written
profit in the long run ‘ 8 a monopoly analysis and
and will be productively
efficient and allocatively ‘men OP Output
efficient (assuming the
absence of externalities Outlining
and economies of scale and that all parallel markets are also achieving allocative assumptions is a neat way
efficiency) and consumer and producer welfare are maximised. In contrast, of demonstrating strong
‘a pure monopoly will restrict output to maximise profit. Profit maximisation understanding of market
occurs where MC=MR at level of output Qmon and price Pmon, well above structures, and can allow
the perfectly competitive market price of PPC. There is a welfare loss and in _ evaluation to be developed
static efficiency terms, the outcome is productively and allocatively inefficient.
not just ‘used
as a picture’
From a static efficiency and welfare point of view, monopoly seems worse and The point is explicitly
specifically with regard to consumers, consumer surplus is less. linked to the question
However, there are a number of other factors to consider, which may mean about the imp nen
monopoly power is desirable for consumers, For example, the conditions for portant
allocative efficiency to be achieved in perfect competition are unlikely to be
‘met; in the case of telecoms there are significant economies of scale, and this
would be true of similar industries such as energy. Allocative efficiency (or the
lack of it) is important for consumers because it is concerned with whether
firms produce the goods consumers most want ~ monopolies may have become
dominant because they supply the goods that consumers desire most! Also, firms
in monopoly may not in practice be profit maximising in the short run. They will,
This is a good example
of how to evaluate by
addressing the underlying
assumptions, as well
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indeed the need to be wary of the attentions of the competition authorities ‘examples as evidence
may lead to other objectives being pursued. In the example of telecoms,
market share may be a significant consideration, Any objective other than
profit maximisation will result in a higher level of output being produced than
QM, and hence a lower price. However, the fact that EE was fined £2.7mfor Another excellent use of the
overcharging consumers lends considerable evidence to the claim that this firm given context
with monopoly power acted against the interests of consumers. Similar claims
have been made against the energy industry for example. There is compelling This is a strong ‘mini
evidence for monopolies being bad for consumers, particularly if they supply conclusion’ for the point on
goods/services for which demand is relatively price inelastic due to the product efficiencies, as a judgement
being a necessity. Businesses can therefore raise price and increase their total ‘has been reached
revenues.
‘That said, we should also examine dynamic efficiencies. The diagram above,
crucially, assumes that monopolies and firms in perfect competition face Evidence of sound
the same cost structure but is unlikely. Indeed, one key reason why British understanding of cost
Telecom was previously nationalised is that it was seen as a natural monopoly, theory, with careful chains
benefitting from significant economies of scale. Even if the monopoly in of analysis being developed
question is being productively inefficient and perhaps even x-inefficient,
the cost difference may be such that the profit maximising price charged to
consumers is less than it would be under perfect competition. Consumer Good link to consumers
surplus will therefore rise. Furthermore, if the monopoly is earning abnormal
profit, this may be used to gain dynamic efficiencies. Dynamic efficiency occurs
when static efficiencies improve over time. In.an industry such as telecoms More excellent use of
where technological progress is occurring at a fast rate, this seems a powerful the context to build an
argument e.g. if profits are used to develop faster broadband or more reliable ‘argument
coverage, again this seems likely to provide a benefit to consumers.
The contestability of the market is one further factor to consider in evaluating if
monopoly is always bad for consumers. In conventional economics, monopolies.
exist and persist because of the existence of high barriers to entry that prevent
new entrants from joining a market and competing away abnormal profit,
allowing consumers to be exploited. However, it may be that there is a single
firm in a market simply because only normal profits are being earned. Where
markets are contestable with low barriers to entry and exit, incumbent firms
have a clear incentive to moderate profit, so as not to provoke hit and run entry
from potential competitors. In this case, consumers benefit from lower prices
__ associated with normal profit rather than abnormal profit, but also gain from
a cost structure likely to be associated with widespread economies of scale.
While a perfectly contestable market is as unlikely as a perfectly competitive
one, technological progress e.g. price comparison websites, is making industries
Again, the paragraph starts
by focusing firmly on the
question
Excellent analytical chains,
using accurate theory
and making connections
between different topics
Good ‘mini conclusion’ to.
such as telecoms more contestable. Over time, this may mean that monopolies the paragraph
are less costly for consumers than perhaps they are now.
In conclusion, the existence of the fines against EE provides strong evidence
that firms with monopoly power can be bad for consumers. However, theory A well-expressed
and indeed real world evidence provides a compelling counter-argument, conclusion, with a good
especially when wider issues than just consumer surplus are considered. It understanding of the
seems likely that technological progress will continue to increase contestability dynamic forces at play in
of a number of key industries and that this will provide some moderation of markets
firms acting against consumer interests. All in all, while some monopolies at
present might be bad for consumers, it is not possible to conclude that all are
bad for consumers.
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The UK's Post Office continues to be strongly affected by increasing competition from
courier services such as UPS in the parcel sector, and by the increasing popularity of online
communications. For example, in December 2016, more people sent electronic Christmas
cards rather than traditional cards through the post. Consequently, the volume of letters
sent via Royal Mail was down 9% in 2016. Evaluate the view that increasing contestability
in markets is always good for the economy.
A contestable market is one in which the potential for competition leads firms to act in
similar ways to if they were in perfect competition; traditional theory seems to suggest that
Increasing contestability is always good. There can be considerable static efficiency benefits
from greater contestability, as well as dynamic efficiency gains, perhaps through so-called
creative destruction. It will be argued that increasing contestability is generally good, but
‘that some mitigating policies might need to be introduced to protect the possible losers.
It can be argued that the static efficiency benefits (allocative and productive efficiency) in
a perfectly contestable market are closer to perfect competition, and this provides support
for the view that increasing contestabilty is good for the economy. Contestable market
theory was developed by Baumol and has become the driving force behind this area of
‘government competition policy. Ina contestable market, the actual structure of the industry
in question (in terms of concentration ratios / number of firms) is irrelevant in determining
the conduct of firms in that market. Instead, the behaviour of firms is determined by the
threat of competition from new entrants. Assumptions such as low barriers to entry and
exit, 2 pool of firms willing and able to enter the market in response to abnormal profit
signals, equal access to available technology and high rates of customer churn characterise
a contestable market. Although as unlikely as perfect competition, a perfectly contestable
market can be closer ta achieving allocative efficiency and productive efficiency than an un=
contestable market. Productive efficiency occurs when firms operate at the lowest point of
their LRAC curves, and indicates that scarce resources are being used to produce maximum,
‘output at lowest cost. Allocative efficiency occurs where P(AR) = MC and indicates
that firms are producing the goods and services which consumers most want. Both of
these characteristics suggest contestability is beneficial. In reality, while all markets are
contestable to a degree, the degree of contestability will vary. Even so, the gains in terms
Of static efficiency are likely to be present. In the case of the Post Office for example, its
traditional markets are subject to a high degree of competition, both real and potential (e.g.
parcel couriers such as Yodel and DPD}.
On the diagram, a profit maximising
ficm protected by barriers to entry will
produce at Qmon and Pmon (where
IMC=MR): Ira contestabtemarket, the
firm will produce at Qcon and Peon,
where AR=AC and profits are normal,
Earning profits above normal would
Incentivise hit and run entry from
firms outside of the market. The firm
In question is closer to allocative and
productive efficiency, suggesting that
increasing contestability is desirable.
That said, such outcomes are not always
maintained. While the low cost airline
industry continues to demonstrate benefits from contestability with growing customer
choice and lower fares, the same is not true of regional buses, which despite being one of
the first industries to experience deregulation and increased contestability, has resulted in
regional monopolies. Incumbent firms have been successful in replacing legal barriers to
entry with strategic barriers, created for example by their ability to integrate the bus and
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Accurate and succinct
definition to start with
Always useful to see the
overall judgement in the
introduction, as this gives
ag stronger structure to the
essay
Good development and
build-up of the point,
demonstrating excellent
knowledge of contestability
and allowing strong AO2
marks to be accessed
Again, excellent technical
knowledge is demonstrated
Good use of context,
supplemented by real
world examples (Yodel and
DPD) - wider reading and
awareness of real world
business is vital
The diagram
is accurate
and carefully
integrated into
the written
analysis ~
itis also
‘comparative’
which allows a
judgement to be
reached on the
desirability of
contestability.
Good use of evidence to act
as evaluation
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rl sides of their business. There have been several investigations from the competition
authorities of anti-competitive behaviour. Generally, the static efficiency benefits do seem.
significant and provide support for the view that increasing contestability is generally good
for an economy.
{further argument in support of the benefits for an economy from increasing contestability
comes from dynamic efficiencies. Dynamic efficiency refers to the process of improvements
in static efficiency over time, While dynamic efficiency is often associated with firms earning
abnormal profit, contestable markets are also likely to exhibit high dynamic efficiency
because improving dynamic efficiency allows firms to maintain their incumbent market
position and appeal to consumers e.g. courier pick-up points, flexible delivery times, parcel
tracking etc. While the drive to achieve dynamic efficiency brings with it considerable
benefits, itis not without costs. Productive efficiency requires firms to pay the lowest
possible price for its factors of production. In the case of the Post Office, much ofits activity
isabour intensive, and trade union density is relatively high. This sector saw strikes over
Christmas 2016 in response to attempts to reform the pension scheme, and previous
industrial action in relation to automated sorting,
More generally, the ability of the Post Office to improve dynamic efficiency is limited by
its ability to utilise economies of scope. Economies of scope arise when itis cheaper to
produce a range of distinct products. While some are clearly present, other firms such as,
‘Amazon, currently expanding its delivery options, arguably have more to gain. There are
other examples too where the drive for dynamic efficiency in contestable markets has led to
difficulties. in the case of a number of delivery firms and Uber taxi drivers, questions have
been raised about employment contracts, employment status and payment rates, Uber is
'@ monopsony employer and has considerable bargaining power to drive wage rates down.
to increase dynamic efficiency. For the individuals concerned, the associated uncertainty
and low rates of pay raise questions of equity. Allin all, while the existence of dynamic
efficiencies generally provide support for the view that increasing contestability is good for
an economy, there are some important issues in relation to employment and job security.
Finally, an economy which is becoming increasingly contestable will be constantly changing.
Its important to question whether this creative destruction is good for an economy. The
term creative destruction was coined by Joseph Schumpeter and refers to the process by
wich technological change and innovation leads to economic growth as new innovations
create more economic value than the businesses being affected. Industries which are
increasing in contestability are full of examples of this type of behaviour occurring. For
example, both Porsche and Ford are developing electric cars, Aldi and Lidl have established
themselves in the supermarket industry, Apple is developing peer to peer lending and Metro
Bank's a new entrant to the banking sector. The result i challenges to existing firms, asis
likely with the growth of Uber and the existing London black cab business, or as happened
vith Kodak following the introduction of digital cameras rendering traditional film obsolete.
Inthe case of the Post Office many oftheir traitionat services-such-a5lotter deliveryare
becoming redundant as email volumes increase. Schumpeter predicted that the overall
benefits to consumers will be postive, but this depends on the flexibility and adaptability of
factor markets. The result could well be unused resources due to structural unemployment,
and resulting increases in relative poverty in certain groups, particulary lower-skill workers.
‘This seems reasonably likely in the case of the labour-intensive Post Office, and perhaps
other sectors. It highlights the need for increasing contestabilty to be accompanied by
other measures such as increased investment in employment training to improve supply
side response to such a shock
Jn conclusfon, the Post office provides a good example of one of the many industries
experiencing increasing contestability, While there are strong theoretical arguments
suggesting benefits to the economy from such a trend, via efficiency Improvements, and
real world examples to back up this claim, there are some reasons to exercise caution. The
case against is less strong, and perhaps could be mitigated with appropriate policies, but it
is there. It cannot therefore be concluded that increasing contestability in markets is always
good for the economy.
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A good fink back to the
question, ensuring that
focus is maintained and
the specific question is
answered
Good use of context, using
some common sense and
real-life examples
Excellent knowledge of the
postal sector
Fantastic synoptic thinking,
demonstrating knowledge
of labour markets and
inequality, as well as
allowing evaluation by
considering different
perspectives
Itis always good to see
students using concepts
that are more challenging
Brilliant examples, followed
by another good link to the
Post Office context
A clear judgement on the
answer to the question is
reached, and is backed up
throughout the essay
tutor2u°Following the UK's vote to leave the European Union and the Single Market, Prime
Minister Theresa May has noted that UK businesses will need to be more competitive
and efficient to compete internationally. Evaluate the effectiveness of government
policies to improve competition and efficiency in the economy.
Competition policy is that part of government policy which seeks to promote
‘competition and efficiency in different markets and industries, and prevent
exploitation of consumers. This essay will first evaluate the effectiveness of policies
to prevent abuse of monopoly power. Next, it will assess policies to liberalise
markets and increase contestability. Finally, it will discuss other policies, outside
the sphere of competition policy, which have a bearing on improving competition
and efficiency. Overall, the effectiveness of policy appears to depend on the power
of the regulators and their willingness to take action when the evidence supports
it.
One key way in which governments aim to improve competition and efficiency is
by preventing the abuse of monopaly power, and aiming to promote competitive
markets, in which market forces reach an efficient equilibrium. However, not
all markets are competitive, or can easily be made more competitive. In the
case of natural monopolies for instance (where long-run economies of scale
are experiencéd over all levels of output), it would be inefficient to have a large
number of firms. Privatised industries such as energy, telecoms and water &
sewerage are such examples, as well as other concentrated industries such as
pharmaceuticals. In these cases, established firms have monopoly power and
may seek to restrict output and raise price to profit maximise at the level where
MMC=MR. There are costs from such actions in terms of static efficiency and
consumer surplus, but there could be gains as economies of scale are exploited
and dynamic efficiencies as abnormal profits are used to fund research and
development, Competition authorities must be careful to promote the gains that
they desire i.e. lower prices, but not reduce the existing benefits i. innovation.
‘One way to improve competition and efficiency against such a background is by
legal restrictions on anti-competitive behaviour backed by fines. These are both
preventative (if fines are high relative to possible gains) and punitive, Another
way in which abuse of monopoly power is prevented is by an active and pre-
‘emptive consideration of mergers and take-overs. In both cases, the competition
authorities take a case by case view to assess the balance of argument. This
suggests that policy needs to be specific to the industry in question to be effective.
However, industry-specific policy takes time and is probably costly; fines may be
appealed, and few mergers have been denied. Furthermore, there is a risk of
government failure. In the recent past, investigation caused a significant delay
in the merger of Poundland and 99p stores and was blamed for the resulting
diseconomies of scale when the merger eventually went ahead. In the case of
privatised industries, itis the industry regulator which attempts to promote
competition and efficiency by (depending on the industry in question) regulating
prices, monitoring levels of customer service and acting as a surrogate competitor.
This is an area where concerns have been raised about the effectiveness of
policy. A recent parliamentary report claimed that rail passengers have been let
down by regulatory failure. There have been criticisms of the profits earned by
the energy industries and the standards of service in the telecoms sector. One
possible explanation is regulators limiting innovation in fast-growing markets
or implementing price caps which remove the incentive for new firms to enter
a market. All in all, while some sort of government intervention to improve
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This is obviously a well-
planned essay, because the
key points are outlined in
the introduction, with a hint
at the overall conclusion.
A huge amount of
economic knowledge
Is demonstrated in
this paragraph, with
connections made from
across the microeconomics
syllabus
This is a good way of
assessing whether policy is
effective.
The student has linked
explicitly back to the
question.
The specific point is now
being directly evaluated ~
this is more effective than
using generic evaluation
Good use of examples to
support the argument
tutor2ucompetition and efficiency is necessary, there does seem to have been some
shortcomings in the current policies in terms of preventing abuse of monopoly
power.
Alternatively, governments could liberalise markets and encourage contestability,
by deregulating and lowering structural/legal barriers to entry, A contestable
market is one in which potential rather than actual competition leads to incumbent
firms moderating the profit they earn to avoid hit and run entry. Technological
advances have increased contestability even further, improving both static and
dynamic efficiency. Examples of dynamic efficiency in contestable markets include
Porsche and Ford developing electric cars, Aldi and Lidl establishing themselves
in the supermarket industry, Apple developing “peer to peer” lending and Metro
Bank entering the banking sector. However, while the low cost airline industry
continues to demonstrate benefits from contestability, the same has not always
been true of regional buses. The regional bus industry was one of the first to
experience deregulation, leading to increased contestability. However, incumbent
firms have been successful in replacing legal barriers to entry with strategic
barriers, created for example by their ability to integrate the bus and rail sides
of their business. There have been several investigations from the competition
authorities of anti-competitive behaviour. Generally, policies to promote
competition and efficiency by liberalising markets and contestability do seem to
have been effective, across a wide range of industries, There are examples where
this has not been the case, but robust use of competition authority powers should
mitigate this. In other words, a multi-pronged approach to competition policy is
needed to counteract the disadvantages of each,
Finally, another important factor to consider is that competition involves a process
of constant change and is likely to lead to a process of “creative destruction”.
Indeed, such a process may be essential if static and dynamic efficiency gains are to
be maximised. However, crucial to the evaluation of whether policies to promote
this are effective is a consideration of the impact on now-redundant resources,
for example, whether London black-cab drivers become Uber drivers, or whether
they look for employment in other industries. In other words, competition policies
are more effective if labour and other product markets are flexible enough to
allocate these resources quickly and at low cost to other uses to prevent structural
unemployment. This is likely to be especially important after the UK leaves the
European Union where competition will come from new trading partners, involved
in all sorts of industries perhaps previously protected by EU external tariffs. The
government policies relevant here are wider than just competition policy, and link
to the economy's supply side. Macroeconomic policies which ensure sustainable
growth and stability, a structure of taxation which provides appropriate incentives,
and policies aimed at ensuring the integrity of the financial system are likely to be
important in encouraging enterprise, innovation and risk taking in the post-Brexit
world i.e. competition policy alone will not be enough,
In conclusion, government policies aimed at improving competition and efficiency
in the economy have been reasonably effective, but more so in some areas than
others. Many privatised utilities, or large firms providing essential services for
Which the coefficient of PED is relatively inelastic, remain reasonably uncompetitive
and arguably inefficient. That said, each year, the UK scores relatively well on the
competitiveness index, indicating success of most government policies in respect
of competition and efficiency and in terms of how competition and efficiency
are likely to impact performance beyond 2019 when the UK is outside of the EU.
However, questions remain especially in some areas of the actions of the CMA and
especially with regard to the post-privatisation regulators.
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A good choice of
contrasting policy — it’s
always useful to contrast
hefty government
intervention with free
market approaches
Excellent examples
The paragraph draws toa
close by linking explicitly
back to the question and
reaching a judgement
The point is made specific
to the question about the
effectiveness of competition
policy
Important to refer to
the Brexit context in the
question
Another careful and specific
link to the question to draw
the paragraph to a close
A thoughtful conclusion,
that doesn’t assume all
industries are the someAlLevel Economics Example Essays - Theory of the Firm
in 2016 and 2017, passengers using the Southern Train network faced significant
disruption due to strike action, initiated due to the desire by the train provider to make
technological changes on trains so that doors can be shut automatically, rather than
by the train conductor. At the same time, technological improvements in driverless
car technology look set to make life easier for drivers. Evaluate the
technological change on the structure of product markets.
Product markets are where all kinds of goods and services are made and traded
‘The market for rail services and cars are examples of product markets. In
considering the likely impact on the structure of product markets of technological
change, this essay will first consider the effect on production processes, followed
by evaluating the impact on product availability and choice, and finally discussing
the impact of creative destruction.
Technological change is likely to impact the structure of product markets through
its effect on methods of production. Market structure refers to the competitive
characteristics of a market, such as the number and size of firms, the degree
of concentration and the size of barriers to entry. At one extreme is perfect
competition and at the other is pure monopoly, where one firm supplies the
entire product market, In between are imperfect market structures such as
monopolistic competition and oligopoly. Rail and car production are examples of
oligopoly markets, where there are a handful of dominant firms. Technological
change is a term used to describe the overall effect of invention and innovation
and the spread of technology. Invention means making something new that did
not exist before. Innovation means turning an invention into a commercially viable
product. innovation affects both products and processes. Process innovation
affects methods of production. Technological change might mean that existing
production methods can be improved or that new methods completely are
possible. The characteristics of production methods, and whether they involve
significant economies of scale has an enormous impact on barriers to entry.
Concentrated markets are likely to be associated with high barriers to entry,
whereas generally, lower barriers mean that markets are more competitive as it is
easier for new firms to enter.
Technological change can impact barriers to entry (and hence product market
structure) in either direction. One possibility is that innovation leads to capital
indivisibilities. Technical economies of scale mean that firms producing on a
larger scale of output will experience cost advantages, and the product market
structure s likely to-be more concentrated—there-are-already- someearly market
leaders in the driverless car industry e.g. Ford. It is equally possible though that
if technological change applies to linked processes within an industry (as it might
for example for driverless cars) then firms might choose to vertically dis-integrate,
Which could increase competition. The impact of technological change depends on
the specific industry and the precise nature of the change.
To that end, there are as many examples where technological change has helped.
lower barriess to entry and led to more contestable markets. Whether this affects
actual market structure depends on the conduct of incumbent firms i.e. whether
they have a first-mover advantage, or whether creative destruction takes place.
In the case of driverless cars, existing companies such as Ford are making strong,
progress, but are being challenged in unexpected ways by Google and Uber who
launched their own driverless car service in 2016 - it is too early to tell how the
market structure will change overall. Also, just because technological change
provides the potential for efficiency gains does not necessarily mean that it will.
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ely impact of
A safe start with a solid
definition, followed by
an outline of the essay
structure, which indicates
good planning.
A “to-the-point” sentence
to open the poragraph that
sets the direction for this
point
Good link to the given
context
Appropriate and extensive
used of terminology
demonstrates knowledge
Both sides of the argument
are considered in the
discussion here, helping to
build both strong analysis
and evaluation
Nice connective phrase: "to
that end”
Excellent reference to
the given context of cars
and also rail - this gives
weight to the arguments
and pushes the essay into
higher mark bands
tutor2uPeel teed t cas als Ao ea TLL)
(One reason is that change may be resisted by workers, especially if they are
represented by a trade union with high density. Southern Trains and the RMT is Strong link back to the
an excellent example of this type of behaviour. Technological change is unlikely to question, ensuring that the
impact on the market structure of regional rail services. Allin all, while it seems essay remains focused —
likely that technological change will affect the structure of product markets via the this is a great way to enda
impact on production processes, the direction (and indeed magnitude) of change paragraph / point
will vary from industry to industry.
Technological progress will also impact the structure of product markets via
product availability and choice. Praduct innovation could mean improving existing
goods and services, or developing entirely new ones. Driverless cars are a clear
example of product innovation. While it is likely that product innovation will
impact market structure, again the direction and size will depend on a number of
factors. There are reasons to think that markets could become more concentrated
if the development in question is protected by a patent (a legal protection to
intellectual capital to reward the risk taking of research and development). This
could happen for features of driverless cars, but is a feature of other markets e.8
the pharmaceutical industry. Even in the absence of patents, itis possible that
first mover advantage will allow the quickest firm into a market to reap some
monopoly power and concentrate the market due to consumer loyalty. However,
sometimes the production processes of new products are associated with lower This is effective evaluation,
barriers to entry and more competitive market structures emerge. One good ‘making use of ‘evidence’ as
example is the development of digital phones and cameras which are significantly ‘the evaluative technique
less capitat-intensive than photographic paper and film. The result was the demise
and eventual bankruptcy of the previously dominant firm Kodak. Again, while it
is certain that there will be an impact on product market structure from product
availability and choice, the direction is ambiguous.
Considering both process
innovation (as in the
previous point) and product
innovation is a great way of
adding depth to the answer
Itis more certain, however, that technological change will impact the structure It is always good to see
of product markets by making the structure more volatile over time, via creative ‘dynamic’ analysis that
destruction (the way in which the opening of new markets and the destruction of considers how the economy
old ones drives changes in market structure from within). Technological change or a market will change,
‘means that product market firms need to be constantly aware of the threats and and the nature of that
opportunities from product and process innovation, and must react if they are change
to survive. In some cases, this has led to firms such as Apple not only innovating
on an ongoing basis but also attempting to grow and consolidate their market
share to strength brand loyalty. Takeaway food delivery innovator Deliveroo is
making the restaurant market more competitive and allowing smaller, non-chain Examples help to lift the
eateries to compete, which may reduce the dominance of larger chains. Driverless quality of the answer, and
reduce the-need:
technology-may-1 for 4orry-drivers-and-consolidate logistics and ass the case here, canbe
transport in the hands of just a few dominant firms, rather than the competitive
used in both analysis and
industry that it currently is. in other areas risk taking which has not paid off, or i
evaluation
lack of risk taking altogether has led to changes in product market structure. For
example, Nokia failed to innovate quickly enough in the smartphone market,
allowing Apple to become more dominant. Market structures may change more
quickly as a result of increasing technological change.
In conclusion, technological change is an increasingly important and constant This is @ good example of a
feature of product markets. While itis relatively certain that market structure question for which there is
will be affected by technological change, some industries are likely to see more __~0 definitive answer. In this
concentrated markets, and some less. The direction and magnitude of change is ¢@5e, the judgement that it
likely to change over time. However, some industries may see litle change at all if 15 t00 difficult to predict the
powerful trade unions oppose such changes, but it is difficult to predict how this impact on market structure
will affect the ongoing survivability of the firm in question, is entirely appropriate
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such as razor blades and razors. The only difference between the products designed for
women and those for men was colour. Evaluate the advantages and disadvantages of
price discrimination.
Price discrimination involves firms with monopoly power charging different prices to A solid definition
different groups of consumers for the same good or service, for reasons unrelated to
cost. This essay will evaluate the arguments for the different degrees (third, second Including the final
and first) of price discrimination, and conclude that the benefits become increasingly judgement in the
weighted in favour of firms rather than consumers as we move from third, to second,
to first degree price discrimination.
introduction is an excellent
way of showing the
Third degree price discrimination occurs when firms are able to segment markets into examiner that the essay is
different groups according to the coefficient of price elasticity of demand, perhaps worthy of a top-band mark
based on income, age, gender and so on, and charge those groups different prices.
This is the type of price discrimination relevant to shaving products. The diagram This is an excellent example
below shows the market for shaving products on the assumptions that female of a complex diagram being
demand is more inelastic than male demand, that razor companies such as Gillette are ysed well in an essay ~it is
price-makers, and that the markets can be separated to prevent seepage/arbitrage. labelled according to the
Profit maximising output for the combined market occurs where MR given context (razors) and
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supernormal profits can be increased even further by re-allocating output between the accompanying written
markets so that MR=MC in each individual market. In this case, female customers analysis
pay a higher price (Pf) than is paid by males (Pm). The benefit to the firm is clear in
terms of producer surplus, and in some cases the boost to cash flow may prove critical
in ensuring business survival. For females, consumer surplus has fallen, but for male Good chain of analysis, that
‘consumers in this example, consumer surplus is higher. Indeed, the lower price may
bring some male consumers within the market who were previously excluded by the
rationing function of prices. Overall, consumer surplus has been replaced by producer
surplus.
is carefully linked to the
precise question
‘The extent to which consumers are disadvantaged, though, depends on whether
higher revenues and profit are used for productive purposes, such as research and The evaluative language
development and innovation, and whether shareholders (who are also consumers) in this opening sentence is
gain higher dividends. tt may also be the case that in some industries, price good, Evaluation is achieved
discrimination allows cross subsidy of activities that bring social benefits such as
medicines sold for lower prices in low or middle-income countries; this is perhaps less
likely to be the case in terms of razors. The hurdle model provides a further reason
here by considering
different perspectives.
This essay moves beyond
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for arguing that some consumers gain from price discrimination. Consumers willing the basic ‘textbook’
~ to overcome some hurdle such as slightly damaged goods, collecting coupans and so ‘approaches to price
on are rewarded with a lower price e.g. accessing online news by answering slightly discrimination and
inconvenient market research surveys rather than paying, Itis doubtful, however, demonstrates up-to-date
that many of these advantages apply to shaving products, although in many industries practicol knowledge
the advantages and disadvantages eppear more evenly balanced. The exception is Excellent synoptic
where third degree price discrimination is taken to an extreme as in price gouging,
‘An example of this behaviour is the fines levied on Nurofen in Australia for selling
exactly the same over-the-counter painkilling product, differently branded, for
different prices. Arguably, this is the case in shaving products. Drawing on behavioural
economics, the use of framing techniques can mislead customers even further and
result in clear producer advantage to the disadvantage of consumers.
knowledge, using some
behavioural economics to
support the argument
In second degree price discrimination, price varies according to quantity sold and
time of purchase. Clearly firms operating on a large scale gain, and second degree There is plenty of technical
price discrimination allows them to benefit from bulk purchasing economies of scale /
monopsony power. This may increase productive efficiency ~ which can lead to lower
prices - but may also mean that markets become more concentrated, so industry
conduct is vital in assessing the advantages and disadvantages, as is the effectiveness
of the competition authorities to respond to or deter anti-competitive behaviour such
2s predatory pricing. Second degree price discrimination may also mean that firms
‘can spread cash flow more evenly (by offering discounts for early purchases) and
utilise spare capacity more effectively. This represents a more efficient use of scarce A nicely developed example
resources, and is economically desirable. There are many examples of this type of to support the analysis
behaviour, such as taxi fares, cinemas and train ticket prices. In the latter, the relatively
inelastic demand pre-9.30am is associated with higher prices than at non-peak times.
The train operating companies benefit from increased revenue and profit, but this can 4 sound ‘mini conclusion”
be used to finance improvements to the service which in many cases is overcrowded that neatly summarises the
‘and outdated. While peak time passengers undoubtedly experience lower consumer paragraph
surplus, and there has been adverse media comment concerning the real increase
in fares, a significant advantage may be reductions in over-crowding on busy trains.
‘Again, the advantages and disadvantages are mixed but seem rather more on the side
Of firms in this case.
detail in here, using
appropriate and extensive
terminology — fabulous!
Finally, first degree price discrimination provides an example where the advantages
fall almost entirely to the firm and the disadvantages to the consumer. In first degree Excellent use of technical
price discrimination, firms segment the entire market, charging each individual ‘economic theory and
the maximum amount they are willing to pay. All consumer surplus is extracted to analysis to develop the
become producer surplus. Most (if not all) consumers will pay a price well above point
‘marginal cost thus increasing allocative inefficiency. While there can still be dynamic
gains the disadvantages seem greater. This approach is becoming more widespread
—as-technological-progress-allows-firms-withan-online presence to conduct auctions
for goods such as aitline upgrades. Without technology, determining the maximum
price that a consumer is willing to pay is costly and difficult for firms. That said, some
consumers who might not be able to afford the product at a given market price may
now find that firms are willing to supply them at lower prices. For the most part,
though, first-degree price discrimination is the least good type of price discrimination
from the consumers’ perspective.
A clear judgement on the
‘answer to the question is
reached, and is backed up
throughout the essay
In conclusion, the advantages and disadvantages of price discrimination are varied
« both in terms of their size, their desirability from an economic perspective and
the groups affected. In many cases, the overall advantages and disadvantages
seem reasonably balanced, especially if ongoing technological progress increases
the pressures on firms to utilise higher revenues and profit for innovation, and
the competition authorities are vigilant and effective. The concern is first degree
price discrimination which is becoming more of a reality. Here there are definite
disadvantages and concerns in terms of consumer welfare and efficiency, and first
degree price discrimination is clearly more worrying than third degree.
‘al tigts nce Nor To BE pHOTOCOPIED tutor2uLevel Economics Example Essays - Theory of the Firm
In 2016, the online estate agent HouseSimple received a £13m injection of capital from
a famous entrepreneur to help it compete with Purple Bricks, the dominant online
estate agent. It is estimated that using an online estate agent can reduce the fees paid
by house-sellers by £6000. Currently around 5% of homes are sold online rather than
through traditional estate agents with a high street presence. That
figure is estimated
to increase to 50% by 2020. Evaluate the impact on markets of increasing competition
from online suppliers.
Online suppliers, who sell goods and services using an electronic network, such as the
internet, are becoming an increasingly common feature of markets, as evidenced by
the estate agency sector where the number of houses sold online i likely to rise from
59% now to 50% by 2020. This essay will consider first the possibility that markets
will become more efficient and welfare will increase. Next, the possibility that, in
contrast, some markets will become more concentrated, and finally the likelihood
that markets will become more disrupted.
One possible impact on markets of increasing competition from online suppliers
is that markets will become more efficient and welfare will increase. In general
terms, efficiency refers to how well scarce resources are used to meet infinite
‘wants. Inereasing competition from online suppliers might mean that markets now
exhibit more of the characteristics of perfect competition. Perfect competition is
a theoretical market structure which is both allocatively and productively efficient
in the long run. Firms are productively efficient when they produce at the lowest
point on their LRAC curve and are allocatively efficient when they produce the
goods people most want (achieved where P{AR) =MC). There are no barriers to
entry, there are large numbers of small firms who are price takers, large numbers of
buyers and there is perfect information. Most sectors are some way removed from
these assumptions, but increased competition from online suppliers could make
some of the assumptions more realistic. The most obvious is perfect information.
Online suppliers allow consumers access to information on their products and prices
with low search costs being incurred. Providing consumers do not exhibit bounded
rationality, this should allow more rational decisions to be taken and will create an
incentive for other firms to be more x-efficient (i.e. pay the lowest price for their
factors of production). An increasing number of online suppliers now exist simply to
ease this process e.g. price comparison websites such as Go Compare. Itis possible
too that increasing competition from online suppliers such as Amazon or eBay
allow new small firms to enter all sorts of markets more easily as barriers to entry
are considerably lower. There is no need to buy premises, undertake expensive
advertising, and develop a website etc.
The diagram allows the impact to
Nice use of context,
demonstrating that this is
not just @ pre-learned rote
answer.
An excellent opening
sentence to the paragraph
that sets the scene and tone
for the paragraph.
This is super analysis,
again demonstrating
some thinking outside of
the box by linking online
developments with the
characteristics of market
structures
Excellent examples,
demonstrating wider
reading and the ability to
apply economic theory to
practice
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closer to perfect competition. The is ~N competition) allows strong
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produce at QM and price PM
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