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This document summarizes an argumentative essay comparing the iOS and Android operating systems. The essay argues that iOS is superior to Android in terms of user security and privacy protections as well as consistent software updates, though Android has advantages of a wider selection of cheaper devices. It provides details on iOS features like built-in antivirus and strict app screening that enhance security. It also shows how iOS receives regular updates for longer than Android models. However, Android supports more diverse devices at lower prices despite inconsistent update schedules posing security risks. Overall, the essay concludes iOS has better security and update advantages making it the superior mobile operating system.
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Argumentative Writting

This document summarizes an argumentative essay comparing the iOS and Android operating systems. The essay argues that iOS is superior to Android in terms of user security and privacy protections as well as consistent software updates, though Android has advantages of a wider selection of cheaper devices. It provides details on iOS features like built-in antivirus and strict app screening that enhance security. It also shows how iOS receives regular updates for longer than Android models. However, Android supports more diverse devices at lower prices despite inconsistent update schedules posing security risks. Overall, the essay concludes iOS has better security and update advantages making it the superior mobile operating system.
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Name : Susan Oktaviana

NIM : 22020154036
Class : Argumentative Essay 2022A

Topic Thesis Antithesis Audience


iOS VS Android : The iOS operating Android also has its Smartphone users,
Which Mobile system developed by own advantages that technology
Operating System is Apple outperforms make it better than enthusiasts, someone
Superior? Android in terms of iOS because it has a interested in mobile
user security and wider choice of operating systems.
privacy, as well as devices, as well as
consistent software cheaper prices.
updates.

iOS VS Android : Which Mobile Operating System is Superior?


(“Ios vs Android Which Is Better - Google Penelusuran” n.d.)

In this modern, increasingly connected era, choosing a mobile operating system is an


important consideration for smartphone users. The competition for the most superior mobile
operating system between Android and iOS has been a debate to date. Each of these mobile
operating systems has its advantages and disadvantages. One of the most superior is the iOS
operating system. The iOS operating system developed by Apple outperforms Android in
terms of user security and privacy, as well as consistent software updates. .
Firstly, iOS is better than Android in terms of security and protection of user privacy
data. (Arora, Sharma, and Aggarwal, 2018) An iOS security feature that is not available on
Android is the built-in antivirus. Android relies on users to install an antivirus solution
because its built-in checks are not as stringent as iOS. On the other hand, Apple has reviewed
all applications in the App Store, thereby reducing the possibility of applications being
infected with viruses. Then the iOS data storage format is safer than Android because iOS
does not have external storage. In addition, the Advanced Data Protection available on iOS
can provide a layer of data protection that will make it difficult for an application on a mobile
device to access or read data and spread malware in data storage.

(“Hasil Gambar Google” n.d.)


Furthermore, iOS gets more regular updates than Android. (Palmer 2022) provides an
example of a comparison between the iPhone 6s and Samsung S6 Edge, which were both
launched in 2015. The iPhone 6s which at that time started with iOS 9 but had to stop until
iOS 15 in 2019 and then the Samsung S6 Edge, which was launched starting from Android
5.0 Lollipop but only reached Android 7.0 Nougat in 2017. This proves that iOS has more
regular software updates than Android. Additionally, when a new version of iOS launches, it
will be accessible to everyone on the same day and time and can be installed immediately on
any device that supports it. Instead, Android will be released gradually to each cellphone.
Even though iOS has advantages in security and regular software updates, Android
also has its own advantages that make it better than iOS because it has a wider choice of
devices, as well as cheaper prices. Android supports mobile phone manufacturers to create
diverse models, which means users can choose mobile devices according to their own
preferences, unlike iOS which only has Apple. Apart from having a large choice of devices,
the price of Android is also relatively cheaper than iOS. However, the diversity of Android
devices is also a weakness when it comes to software updates, according to Daniel Markuson
in an article on nordvpn.com the number of Android devices that Google has to service it
almost impossible to keep them all updated to the same level of security and for the same
amount of time and frequency. Inconsistency in Android software updates can lead to a poor
user experience. This makes Android mobile devices cheaper than iOS because software
updates are released infrequently and are only supported for a short time.
In conclusion, the iOS operating system has better advantages than Android in terms
of security and data privacy as well as consistent software updates. This is proven by the
built-in antivirus feature, strict checks on applications in the App Store and advanced data
protection on the device. Additionally, iOS also outperforms Android in regular and
consistent software updates, with updates accessible to all users simultaneously. Another
thing is that Android has the advantage of a wider choice of devices and is cheaper but it
lacks inconsistent software updates, which can cause security vulnerabilities on these devices.
Thus, iOS proves to be a mobile operating system that is superior to Android.
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