Outlining LP
Outlining LP
in
English – Grade 11
(English for Academic and Professional Purposes)
B. Materials: laptop and LCD projector (if available), copy of the powerpoint presentation of the lesson
K-W-L Chart, Picture / Word Cards, Graphic Organizers (table, charts, Venn Diagram)
C. References: SLM in English for Academic and Professional Purposes (EAPP) for Grade 11, pages 8 - 28
A. Preliminary Good morning class! How is your day so far? Good morning Ma’am. We are fine.
Activities
That’s good to hear! So can I expect a full blast
Greeting of energy and active participation from you? Yes Ma’am.
Before we begin our lesson this morning, let us (A student leads the prayer.)
ask the guidance of our Almighty God and let Let us bow our head and feel the presence of
us enlighten our mind to completely understand the Lord.
the lesson this morning. Father God
Martha, please lead the prayer. Come be with us today,
Fill our hearts with joy,
Prayer
Fill our minds with learning,
Fill our classrooms with peace,
Fill our lessons with fun,
Fill our friendships with kindness,
Fill our school with love.
Amen
I would like to request everyone to arrange your (The students arrange their chairs and pick up
Classroom
chairs properly and make sure there are no the trashes.)
Management
trashes around you.
B. Developmental Let’s move on to our first activity this morning. Yes ma’am.
Activities Are you ready class?
1.
1. Checks and Balances
2.
2. Hairbrush
3.
3. Irritated
4.
4. I believe in you.
5.
5. Opponents
6.
8. 8. Forbidden Fruit
9. Toothpick
9.
10. Windblown
10.
Yes ma’am. There are two groups / two games.
Very good class. Do you have any observations
about the cards? What is it? (The students sort the game cards.)
Let’s sort the game cards into to two groups or
categories. The first group is 4 Pics 1 Word Game.
What do you call the first group? The second group is Rebus Puzzle / Game.
What do you call the second group? 4 Pics 1 Word Game is a word guessing game
What is a 4 Pics 1 Word Game? that presents you with four pictures and the
tasks you with guessing what specific word fits
with the theme of the photos presented.
Rebus Puzzle is a puzzle device that combines
What is a Rebus Puzzle / Game? the use of illustrated pictures with individual
letters to depict words, phrases or sentences.
D. Activity (Lesson Using Task 2 activity, let’s do Task 3 by (The students do the activity.)
Proper) completing the table. Task 3: A Memory to Write: Completing the
Table
What is our lesson today? Our lesson today is all about Outlining.
What is an outline? An outline is a map of your essay or a blueprint.
It shows what information each section or
paragraph will contain, and in what order. Most
outlines use numbers and/or bullet points to
arrange information and convey points.
What are the importance of an outline? An outline allows a writer to categorize the main
points, to organize the paragraphs into an order
that makes sense, and to make sure that each
paragraph/idea can be fully developed.
Essentially, an outline helps prevent a writer
from getting stuck when performing the actual
writing of the essay.
Why do we need to do an outline? ✓ Your main points are on-topic and directly
support your thesis.
✓ Your main points are logically organized.
✓ Your most important ideas are emphasized,
and your less important ideas are subordinated.
✓ Your main points have enough and relevant
supporting evidence.
Outlines also help writers:
✓ Make the writing process easier since you
have a road map for your essay to follow.
✓ Break through writer’s block—for people who
struggle with writer’s block, it helps to first set up
a structure with lower stakes and less pressure.
✓ Save time writing your essay since you have
a clear, focused plan to follow for your essay.
✓ Ensure each part of your essay relates to the
essay.
How are you going to do an outline?
✓ Put the thesis statement at the top: it should
be polished and be a complete sentence.
✓ Use Roman numerals (I, II, III, IV, V, etc.) to
indicate the main points/topic sentences which
should be written in specific phrases or complete
sentences (this is the “P” or Point of PIE).
✓ Use capital letters (A, B, C, D, E, etc.) for the
major supporting details; typically, writers should
have at least two main supporting details for
each point/topic sentence (the “I” or information
of PIE providing evidence and the “E” or
explanation of PIE providing analysis).
✓ Use numbers (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, etc.) for sub-
details clarifying and specifying your main
supporting details.
What are main points? Main points (also known as main idea). Chief
point an author is making about a topic. It sums
up the author’s primary message.
What are sub-points? Sub -Points (also known as supporting details or
idea). A paragraph contains facts, statements,
examples-specifics which guide us to a full
understanding of the main idea. They clarify,
illuminate, explain, describe, expand and
illustrate the main idea and are supporting
details.
What are the types of outlines according to Types of Outlines According to Structure
structure? 1. Topic Outline
An outline that consists of a short phrase.
It provides a quick overview of topics to be
included in an essay. You are probably already
familiar with this structure. Look at a syllabus
from one of your courses. It is probably the
equivalent of a topic outline, with topics listed for
each unit, and readings and assignments under
each. After each heading in a topic outline for an
essay, a maximum of several words is used to
identify the topic or idea that will be discussed
under the given heading.
2. Sentence Outline
An outline that is done in full sentence. It
Forces part of the essay to be written out in
sentences before the first draft. Further, it
expresses the specific and complete idea that
that section of the paper will cover as part of
proving the overall thesis.
Sentence Outline
Thesis Statement: The abuse of alcohol and
drugs can affect a person economically,
psychologically, and physically.
I. Alcohol and drug abuse can affect one
economically.
A. The cost of alcohol abuse is high and
getting higher.
1. The costs of DUIs can be
enormous.
2. Alcohol costs are always rising
because of rising production costs as well as
state and local taxes.
B. The cost of drug abuse can be high.
1. Even the arrest for the possession
of a minute amount of drugs can result in high
bail and court cost.
2. The cost of drugs fluctuates
drastically according to the type of drug, its
availability, and the amount.
II. Alcohol and drug abuse can have severe
psychological effects.
A. Alcohol abuse can damage a person
psychologically.
1. Alcohol is a depressant and can
alter the personality of anyone.
2. The abuse of alcohol can lead to the
psychological addiction to alcohol.
B. Drug abuse can be detrimental to one
psychologically.
1. Drugs impair one's ability to function
normally because of the hallucinations or
numbness of "getting high."
2. Drugs can become a psychological
addiction.
By now you have gained understanding of the Task 5: Let’s Create Memories
terms and concepts of outlining in this module. Differentiate a topic outline and a sentence
The following activities will measure how much outline in terms of their structure using a Venn
you have understood the lesson. diagram.
Let us sum up the salient points discussed in Task 7: Match to Your Memories
this lesson. Get ready to figure them out! Directions: Match the group of words in Column
Match the group of words in Column A with the A with the concept/parts of outline they refer to
concept/parts of outline they refer to in Column in Column B. Write only the letter of your choice
B. Write only the letter of your choice on the on the blank provided.
blank provided.
F. Abstraction
You have just learned about the types of Task 8: It’s My Time to Shine
outlines, and that makes you ready for more Directions: Imagine that you are being invited to
learning activities. speak in a certain occasion like birthday party,
graduation ceremony, giving sermon for a
G. Application church service, giving an inspirational message,
and others. Write an outline for your message.
You may choose between topic and sentence
outline.
(The students do their work quietly.)
Why do we need to do an outline? ✓ Your main points are on-topic and directly
support your thesis.
✓ Your main points are logically organized.
✓ Your most important ideas are emphasized,
and your less important ideas are subordinated.
✓ Your main points have enough and relevant
supporting evidence.
Outlines also help writers:
✓ Make the writing process easier since you
have a road map for your essay to follow.
✓ Break through writer’s block—for people who
struggle with writer’s block, it helps to first set up
a structure with lower stakes and less pressure.
✓ Save time writing your essay since you have
a clear, focused plan to follow for your essay.
✓ Ensure each part of your essay relates to the
H. Generalization essay.
How are you going to do an outline? ✓ Put the thesis statement at the top: it should
be polished and be a complete sentence.
✓ Use Roman numerals (I, II, III, IV, V, etc.) to
indicate the main points/topic sentences which
should be written in specific phrases or complete
sentences (this is the “P” or Point of PIE).
✓ Use capital letters (A, B, C, D, E, etc.) for the
major supporting details; typically, writers should
have at least two main supporting details for
each point/topic sentence (the “I” or information
of PIE providing evidence and the “E” or
explanation of PIE providing analysis).
✓ Use numbers (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, etc.) for sub-
details clarifying and specifying your main
supporting details.
B. Sentence Outline
How can humanity address the damage
inflected on the environment?
Prepared by: